I love all the details just listening to this, The line about how everything is is silenced and when do we actually notice because everyone is buried into their phones, if i were to underline a line, it would be that one. I like how this poem is so relatable to the world we live in and just all the imagery and detail is so strong and pure! I would like to see maybe more of like the point of view of these things like who is seeing it, is it just you or someone else? Great job!