https://soundcloud.com/kallie-lynn-overstreet/final-day-poem
The final day
By: Kallie Overstreet
It was just another ordinary day
Typical Florida weather
Sunny one moment
Pouring the next
Humid amongst it all
Now classes are cancelled
Everyone is freaking out
A pandemic is coming
everyone needs to leave
6 feet apart please
And don’t go around with your friends
It was just an ordinary day and now...
It seems the world is ending
Everything is on lockdown
Restaurants.
Movies.
Businesses.
Why couldn’t this have come at a different time
Or not even came at all
I never realized that this would be the final day.
Hey Kallie! Great poem! i feel like you maybe could've gone into a little more detail in some of your lines but i do like the realism that you are setting given the circumstances around us right now. The line the stood out to me the most was probably "everyone needs to leave, 6 feet apart please" to me it really flowed in the way it sounded. Good job! :)