Hey y'all, here's the link to my reading of this poem: https://soundcloud.com/joellel/now-that-you-are-away
And I've included a screenshot of it below! I apologize for the delay!
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Hey y'all, here's the link to my reading of this poem: https://soundcloud.com/joellel/now-that-you-are-away
And I've included a screenshot of it below! I apologize for the delay!
Hello Joelle,
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I love the directness and very vivid imagery you provided throughout the piece. Even though your writing is very unique to your own experience, I was able to apply it to my own life. That was something I really loved. I'd love to see if you implemented more senses throughout the poem. Touch, smell, taste, sight, noise... I think it would heighten what is already so beautiful. Good job!