Hi everyone! Here's the audio link for my poem: https://soundcloud.com/user-791829904/a-florida-story

I tried to focus on story and detail within this poem more than anything. I felt like the third stanza needed more in general, of what though I'm not exactly sure. I just felt blocked writing the third stanza and I think it could've had a stronger ending. anyways, i'm open to any and all constructive criticism!