Poetic Technique

https://soundcloud.com/ella-schoening/remembering-you I know this poem is kind of ambiguous, I tried to play around with it a bit but I ended up liking this version the best. Let me know if the ambiguity works or if I do need to put more explanation in. Also if you guys could tell me which gate yo

https://soundcloud.com/mat-wenzel/original-poem To at least one of my committee members, this poem stood out from my manuscript as being too opaque or linked to personal details that no one else understands. In which lines might you agree or disagree with them? What lines/words stood out to you? Wha

Hi everyone! Here's the audio link for my poem: https://soundcloud.com/user-791829904/a-florida-story I tried to focus on story and detail within this poem more than anything. I felt like the third stanza needed more in general, of what though I'm not exactly sure. I just felt blocked writing the t

Hello everyone, here is the link to my spoken word poem if you would like to listen to it: https://soundcloud.com/user-711670661/the-rotten-pit ... I have always attached an image of my poem below, let me know what you think!